Wednesday, August 21, 2013

TaTyana's Peer Profile of Alyssa



Alyssa Taylor: Superwoman

      Alyssa Taylor is eighteen years old and already has two jobs. She works as a lifeguard and at an non profit organization called Publicolor. At Publicolor the workers utilize color to advocate education in schools and community centers.After working two jobs she attends a writing program at City College of New York. In her spare time Alyssa is an athlete. She is a swimmer and wrestler, but her love belongs to basketball. As I patiently wait for Alyssa I observe that she is wearing a purple sweater and black basketball shorts. “Alright, I’m ready.” she says.
Ms. Taylor was born in February 20, 1995 in  Methodist Hospital located in Brooklyn, NY. Her cultural background stems from a Trinidadian mother and her father being Panamanian. As I ask her whether she is bilingual. Her answer is immediately no and her language preference is english. Even though she prefers to read and write in english she still wishes that her father taught her some of his native language.
Growing up Alyssa Taylor mainly went to schools in Brooklyn. The preschool she attended was Helen Owen Carey. Next she attended P.S 321 The William Penn School, which is in Park Slope. School for International Studies succeeded her previous education at P.S 321. Alyssa Taylor’s next school that she would attend is the Urban Assembly Institute of Math and Science for Women. As Alyssa makes her transition from high school student to college bound scholar she will be attending City College of New York in the fall. During her many years of education Alyssa has always liked to learn new things and information about topics. She states in the interview, “ I love to learn. I have a motto that’s try everything once because you never know what you like until you experienced it.”
As our interview transitions to writing my next inquiry is about her most memorable writing experience and she answers, “Am I suppose to remember that?”  An unknown male figure laughs at Alyssa’s remark as he walks past. Once the joke has died out Alyssa takes a dramatic pause. She stops moving in her chair and with excitement in her eyes replies, “ Oh my gosh, my college essay. Not even that, the speech I made for Publicolor is my college essay.”  She goes into detail about how the people at Publicolor made her rewrite her speech approximately fifteen times before submitting a final draft. While retelling the story she moves her hands dramatically and frequently emphasis the number of times she rewrites her speech- fifteen is really the exact number.  At the sound of it I had to ask her if she really counted the number of times she rewrote her speech. However my question was ignored and she continues to talk about the events revolving around her Publicolor presentation. 
In both writings she discusses how she was set apart from the rest of the people in her school: “I was a lonely kid. I went to a school where you had to be a follower to fit in. People didn’t like me because I didn’t want to be a follower.” This excerpt came from Taylor’s speech and I was surprised at how her life was before I met her. On the outside I saw Alyssa as a superwoman who could anything; how could she possibly be a pariah if she was so indestructible? After a hectic process of editing and rewriting a speech that turned into an essay Alyssa was denied admission into many of the colleges she applied to.
Publicolor is Alyssa’s pride and joy. Before entering the program she was an outcast and now she is a better person with the help of Publicolor. The organization paints schools in every borough to promote education in communities. Additionally the organization helped improve the relationship Alyssa had with her mother. In her college essay she states, “ My mom and I have a difficult relationship...My experiences with Publicolor helped me step outside of the problems with my mother.” Not only does Publicolor help to improve the education system in New York, it also repairs relationship for people too. If Alyssa did not join Publicolor her relationship with her mother would’ve remained complicated, but now it Alyssa and her mother are able to work out their own situations.
Although, Alyssa’s favorite subjects are math and science she enjoys reading. Her response to what she prefers to read is everything. If anybody recommends something to her she reads it. Taylor’s all time favorite readings is the Divergent series by Veronica Roth. In her opinion the series is better than another popular series called the Hunger Games because it has more action.
Many people may have different reasons as to why they want to go to college and pursue what they want to do. Alyssa Taylor’s motivation to go to college comes from her brother and sister who did not attend college. She says that her sister did not graduate from high school, but eventually got her GED and her brother struggled in high school.  “Seeing them struggle and living with my mom motivated me to go to college so that I wouldn’t have to struggle.”  
As the interview comes to a close my last question to Alyssa is where does she see herself in four years. Her response is very detailed and meaningful. She knows that in four years her life is not going to be revolve around sitting behind a desk at 9-5 job wearing “uptight suits” and “typing my life away.” Alyssa’s perception of herself is wearing comfortable clothing and being active with her hands. If someone told her to design a product she would want to have the ability to create the product how she wants it to be. Hence why she wants to pursue a career in mechanical engineer.
Alyssa Taylor is not your ordinary girl. Her lifestyle is adventurous and her appearance shows that she is a strong, independent woman who doesn’t give up. Waking up at 3:00 A.M, juggling two jobs and a writing program exemplifies her hunger for success and her desire to be opposite from her older siblings.Rewriting a speech and turning it into and essay shows that Alyssa is the  is ambitious and gets the job done no matter how many times she has to revise something. Although Alyssa writing may not be her favorite thing to do, her passion is for math, Publicolor and basketball. After conducting our interview she sends me a picture with a caption that sums up everything that is important to her in her life:
This right here is me. All of me. Everything here is something I had to work for [and] it's what I believe in. My two blue shirts: My Jersey represents my blood, sweat and tears not only on the court but in life, sometimes things get rough but you gotta fight through it no matter what. My Publicolor shirt represents my colorful side, it may be clean now but when you get ready and life throws different colors at you, you must use them to create something beautiful. My tools: the brush is a symbol of how I create. The calculator is a symbol of my greatest passion which is math. The pouch is my storage mentally, physically and emotionally it may be small but it holds a lot. The ball which is my heart, soul and brain, without it I'd be nothing. Last but not least is Violet, the pillow pet. I've only had her about a year but she is always by my side when I need her [plus] she's purple. Some say materials define our generation, but they don't. These guys just help me understand who I want to be.

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